Handwritten words visible: "I'm sorry I couldn't say goodbye. — Grandma" A single raindrop hits the paper, smearing the ink.
8 pages (suggested for a short chapter) Page 1 (Full-page establishing shot) Panel 1 (Wide, muted tones): A deserted rural bus stop at dusk. Rain falls in thin, steady streaks. The signpost reads "Yūrei-guchi" (Ghost Crossing) — worn, barely legible. An old wooden bench sits alone under a flickering fluorescent light. No text. Sound effects: silent. Only the visual rhythm of rain. Page 2 (Four panels) Panel 1 (Medium shot): A young woman, Hana (early 20s, tired eyes, wet hair clinging to her face), sits on the bench. She holds a crumpled letter in her lap. Her knuckles are white. silent omnibus manga
A single tear. She nods. Page 8 (Final page — silent resolution) Panel 1 (Wide shot outside the bus): The omnibus drives away into the mist. Hana stands alone at the ghost crossing again. But now the rain has stopped. Dawn light breaks over the hills. Handwritten words visible: "I'm sorry I couldn't say goodbye
Hana’s eyes widen.
The old woman slowly turns her head.